Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Jessica and Adam by Joni milgram.

Jessica and Adam met five years ago. She was working as a doctor in London. One day she saw him at a friend’s birthday party. He was a university student, but was doing a summer job as employee in a cinema. He had come to the place where she was working in the LORIENT HOSPITAL in London.
As Adam was leaving, he left a little message next to Jessica's computer that said: "I love you my love, I can’t live without you". Jessica phoned him when she read the message and they met the same evening. Adam and Jessica liked each other a lot because both of them like do the same things, for example go to the park, listen pop music and play the guitar.
One day a terrible thing happened. Jessica was hit by a car while she was crossing the street. She was badly hurt. Six months later, Jessica was OK again. Adam had helped her a lot; he was in the hospital with Jessica all days.

1 comment:

Jimena Cas said...

Very good work Joni! Please check some language mistakes, such as:
liked
listen to
every day
Also check that it is not very clear how/where they met, was it at the hospital or at a party??
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